+ good source of interview with the teenage mother, i can see that you cut out the personal question where you asked her if she had an abortion, which was very good.
- the wind sound when you are outside is still very loud and i think that you could have re-filmed it. Also the graphics shown is unclear and very hard to read. Its also abit short-under the 5 min.
.Appropriate song used at the beginning .Relevant images used at the opening sequence... .Good range of Vox pop's, .Voice over while the child is playing piano...keeps the audience engaged . HOWEVER, when you rea
+ good source of interview with the teenage mother, i can see that you cut out the personal question where you asked her if she had an abortion, which was very good.
ReplyDelete- the wind sound when you are outside is still very loud and i think that you could have re-filmed it. Also the graphics shown is unclear and very hard to read. Its also abit short-under the 5 min.
other than that good job.
Good -You had a good range of shots and good choice of interview with some who has exprienced being pregnant when a teenager.
ReplyDeleteBad - it was a bit difficult to see the graphics and also the windy sound made it difficult to hear the presenter.
I don't think you documentary appeals to the audience strongly enough to your target audience because there is not a lot focused on our age group.
ReplyDeleteI don't there is a place for your documentary as there have been similar interesting documentaries which has covered the very same topic.
There isn't a range of conventions in your documentary which has made the topic less interesting.
You need to improve the shots of when you were coming outside of the chemist and besides that you don't have a range of shot types.
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ReplyDelete.Appropriate song used at the beginning
.Relevant images used at the opening sequence...
.Good range of Vox pop's,
.Voice over while the child is playing piano...keeps the audience engaged
. HOWEVER, when you rea